@Begin
@Participants:	JPN010
@Age:	23
@Sex:	F
@YearInSchool:	U4
@Major:	literature
@StudyHistory:	10
@OtherLanguage:	German=2;other=1
@Qualification:	STEP=2(1999);TOEFL_CBT=210(2002);none=
@Abroad:	none=;none=
@Reading:	4
@Writing:	3
@Listening:	3
@Speaking:	3
@JapaneseEssay:	3
@EnglishEssay:	3
@Difficulty:	4
@Topic:	school education
@TWE:	3;3;3
@Comments:	
@Coder:	2005-12-21 DataInputBy SAKAUE Tatsuya;
@Version:	2.0
*JPN010:	The school education in the future
%NTV:	School education in the future
%COM:	Alternative title: Wealth and school education in the future
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*JPN010:	In Japan, the worth of education is changing these days.
%NTV:	OK
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*JPN010:	The quality of school education has become increasingly different from school to school.
%NTV:	The quality of education has become increasingly varied from school to school.
%COM:	
*JPN010:	It may depend on where the school is located or whether it is a public school or private school, or whether it has a connection with a further level of education such as a university.
%NTV:	The quality may depend on where the school is located, whether it is a public or a private school, or whether it has a connection with a higher level of education, such as a university.
%COM:	
*JPN010:	The aims of school education are also various now.
%NTV:	The aims of school education have also become varied.
%COM:	
*JPN010:	However, it seems that they give more importance to the high-level ability of studying.
%NTV:	However, all schools seem to put a priority on achieving a high-level ability of studying.
%COM:	
*JPN010:	Of course so did they in old days, but I feel the gap of the quality of school education between each schools has been extended.
%NTV:	Of course, they have been doing so for a long time, but I feel the gap in the quality of education between schools has widened.
%COM:	
*JPN010:	Moreover, that gap can be caused by the gap of wealth.
%NTV:	Moreover, this gap can be caused by gaps in wealth.
%COM:	
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*JPN010:	I have heard that Doushisha University and Ritsumeikan University set a new elementary school of their own and they aim to make children get a good ability of studying.
%NTV:	I have heard that Doushisha University and Ritsumeikan University have set up new elementary schools of their own, aiming to give children a good ability for studying.
%COM:	Did you hear this or read it? You may want to use "read" rather than "heard."
*JPN010:	What surprised me in that article was that those schools serve lunch cocked by famous hotels' chefs.
%NTV:	What surprised me was that those schools serve lunches cooked by chefs from famous hotels.
%COM:	
*JPN010:	They use the local foods that are safety and good for health.
%NTV:	They use local foods that are safe and good for health.
%COM:	
*JPN010:	All these are for the good education for children.
%NTV:	All of this is for good education for the children.
%COM:	
*JPN010:	Of course the fee is so expensive that ordinary people can't afford.
%NTV:	Of course, the fees are so expensive that ordinary people cannot afford to send their children to these schools.
%COM:	
*JPN010:	That to say how good education we can take depends on how rich we are, though I can't say what the good education like here.
%NTV:	This means that how rich we are determines how good an education we can receive, although I cannot say whether the efforts of these schools really produce good education.
%COM:	
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*JPN010:	It may be welcomed that we have more choices as there are many schools with various characteristics.
%NTV:	Some may welcome these new schools, taking the increased choices of schools with various characteristics as an advantage.
%COM:	
*JPN010:	However, we can say so only when all of us have the equal opportunity to choose what school we want to go.
%NTV:	However, we can say so only when all of us have the equal opportunity to choose what school we want to attend.
%COM:	
*JPN010:	School education occupy the most part of  time in childhood, so school education is no doubt essential for how one grow up and lead one's life.
%NTV:	School education occupies most of childhood, so it has an essential influence on how one grows up and leads one's life.
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*JPN010:	The issue about school education like this will occur because every kind of services is absorbed in market economy, which makes winner and loser, wealth and poverty, as well as social and medical services.
%NTV:	Equal opportunity will continue to arise as an issue for school education as well as social and medical services because all of these services operate in the market economy, which makes winners and losers, wealth and poverty.
%COM:	
*JPN010:	It necessarily doesn't cause only bad things, of course, but we need to discuss how we maintain people's basic need that is important to live a good-quality life.
%NTV:	This does not necessarily cause only bad things, but we need to discuss how we can maintain people's basic needs, which are important to living a good-quality life.
%COM:	
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